He Korero Hemingway
Ko te tauira tawhito o tenei ko te korero a Hemingway "Hills Like White Elephants." I roto i te korero, he tane, he wahine hoki e noho ana i roto i te waka tereina korero.
I te wa e haere ana te whakaaturanga, ka kitea he maama me te hiahia o te tangata kia whanau he materoto:
"Ko te pai o te pia me te hauora," ka mea te tangata.
"He pai," ka mea te kotiro.
"Ko te mahi tino pai tenei, Jig," ko ta te tangata i korero. "Ehara i te mea he mahi katoa."
I titiro te kotiro ki te whenua ka okioki nga waewae o te tepu.
"E mohio ana ahau kaore koe e mahara, e Jig, ehara i te mea he mea noa iho.
Kaore te kotiro i korero.
"Ka haere ahau ki a koe, a, ka noho tonu ahau ki a koe i nga wa katoa.
"Na, he aha ta tatou e whai muri ai?"
"Ka pai ta tatou mahi i muri mai."
"He aha koe e whakaaro ai?"
"Koinei anake te mea e whakararuraru ana ia matou. Ko te mea noa anake i pouri ai matou."
Kia mahara ko te materoto, ko te tukanga, anake ka tohua ki. Ka awhina tenei i to raatau kino ki te kaupapa, engari he mea tino tika hoki.
No te mea ko te mea nui i runga i o ratau hinengaro, he aha i tohua ai e ratou? A, i te mea ka whakaarohia e te kaituhi iti ake te hiahia a te kaipānui ki te whakatuwhera i te kaupapa, kaore a Hemingway e pai ki te tuku i tetahi. I tua atu i te kaha ake o te mahi, he pai ake hoki ki te kaipānui.
Ko te Ahuritanga o te Whakawhiti Korero
Whakatauritea tenei ki tenei whakaaturanga pakaru mai i te pakiwaitara akomanga:
"Nana, e mohio ana au kua kii au ki a koe ki taku hui!" ka karanga ia. "Engari e kino ana koe ki aku kaitautoko, kaore koe e pai ki te haere mai ki a au. Kaore koe e hiahia ki te mahi i tetahi mea ke. I muri mai i te hokonga mai o taua whare tawhito tawhito, kua rite koe ki nga kiriata taapene e whakaatu ana koe ki reira. Kaore au e haere ki reira. Kaore koe e hiahia ki te whakamatautau i tetahi mea hou. "
"Mahalo no te mea kua ngenge ahau i muri i te whakahaere i te taakaro kiriata tawhito i te ra katoa."
"Ko te mea e pupuhi tonu ana koe i taku mata, he moni hoki taku, kua hokona mai e au tenei whare, ka oma atu ahau, na, mehemea kaore au he mahi pono?"
Whakaarohia ki to waahi whakamutunga. He aha i whakamaramatia e koe ki a ratau he aha i mutu ai nga mea? Kaore pea i tuhia e koe nga raruraru kotahi, i roto i nga rerenga katoa, i roto i taua tautohe whakamutunga. Ko te korero i konei ka nui ake te whakaaro ki te whakapuaki i etahi korero pono ki te kaipānui, he aha te mea kaore e tino rite ana te korero a Hemingway. (Ahakoa i roto i te korero a te kaituhi, ko wai o tatou e pai ana me Hemingway?)